Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

My Short Story

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Written by Caden for the 100 word challenge

We managed to squeeze Kayes bow into the tunnel.  Then we agreed to walk in the only direction-forward. “I thought the man said the scooter was ON main street, not under it.” Jason mumbled. We kept rolling along until we arrived at a building. It looked like a white castleThe patterns on it were quite craftyLeaves blew around it. Yet it seemed to be saying something like I’m okay if you come in, but you might not come out. “Should we go in?” Kaye asked. “Weve got no choice.” I replied. Together, the three of us stepped in. 

One Comment

  1. Caden,
    Your piece had me wondering what the characters would do. I like how each character’s personality is expressed by your word choices. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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