Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Mini Man Part 2

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Written by Julianna for the 100 word challenge 

As we left off the bee ate Alfred and Francesca and then left their house like nothing happened. Well after that Roni lived alone for life wahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! He ate ice-cream alone went to the store alone ate pizza alone he needed to find a new brother, so he went out brother shopping. He put on his mask and left to go brother shopping. He put papers up saying I need a brother come to 9800 east Mia lane for more info. After he went out, he felt really ill and died a few days later.   

 

 

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  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Julianna. I think you generated interesting ideas for your text, but in your haste to write them down you forgot about punctuation. Accurate punctuation helps your readers to easily read and understand your text. 😊

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