Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

The Sickness

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Written by Raiya for the 100 word challenge 

One day, Clara was playing in the garden watering her lavender. Then, her mother ran outside told Clara to go into her room.  After a few hours, her mother came into her room with tears in her eyes. “It’s your father” She said. “He felt reallill, so we called a doctor, he said he has an incurable disease.” Clara felt sadness. She ran back into the garden and saw an earth fairy. The fairy said,” For taking such great care of our Earth, I shall grant you one wish.” Clara wished for her father to get well, but then…. 

One Comment

  1. Wow! What a cliff hanger! I would love to know what happened and hope that you will finish it. Well done on creating a story that keeps your reader hooked.
    Keep up the great writing.

    Ms Young (Team 100WC)

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