Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Cheeto Bee pt.3 

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Written by Danny for the 100 word challenge

Today I woke up in a hospital! I had a bracelet on and I didn’t remember putting it on. Wait do have something wrong with me Cheeto dr? “Yes, you do Cheeto Bee.” What do I have wrong? When you had your party when you weren’t supposed to, your body did something when you were moving around a lot.” “You have to get 5 shots into your body.” Oh boy, that’s going to hurt. “No, it will not we will just num your whole body so you won’t feel it.” Oh, that’s good. 

One Comment

  1. I love your opening sentence – I wanted to know straight way what had happened.
    Keep up the good writing!

    Ms Young
    Team 100WC
    London

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