Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Quarterwise

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Written by Nathan for the 100 word challenge

So today when I was on a bike ride with my family, we saw this weird yellow bicycle just hanging on a wood pole. My family and I decided to check it out. When we cut the zip tie, the bike just went rolling down the hill and into the bushes it went. So, we went down the hill and it led us to a sewer, and it was kind of creepy. We heard this strange laugh and it made it even creepier. Then, a clown popped out and he said his name was ‘’Quarterwise’’. To be continued….. 

2 Comments

  1. Hello Nathan,

    Oh, no! Quarterwise has made it’s appearance. Could it be Pennywise’s brother or cousin? Is Quarterwise’s style to use yellow bikes rather than red balloons? We might have to wait for the continuation to find out.

    Your story is well written with my only tip being to not start a sentence with ‘so’.

    Keep writing and sharing. I can see you have great ideas.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. my error… it’s should have been its

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