Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Stolen pt. 3

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Written by Danny for the 100 word challenge

Then the kid found me. My heart stopped and I wanted to pedal off into the woods but I don’t think I would make it in time. But I got on the black bike to take a short cut through the woods to make it to my house. I started pedaling so fast the chain on the bike almost broke. The kid went on his yellow bike to come chase after me. Then I ran over a tree root and did a back flip on the bike. I landed straight on my face, it hurt. 

One Comment

  1. Hi Danny
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I loved the excitement and the pace of your story.
    Your first sentence immediately drew me in and I wanted to find out more.
    I do wonder why this kid was chasing after you?
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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