Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Walking in the Forest with a Mystery Pt. 4 

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Written by Mia for the 100 word challenge

 The Dize family got in the taxi but it would not move. When they got the car to move, they all got in and started to ride home in the taxi. Then a few minutes past and Giana screamed, “Look I see a yellow bike connected to the tree!” Miya added “Oh no I see the trees moving is it bigfoot” “Bigfoot is not real so do not be scared” said the taxi driver.  Miya yelled “IT IS REAL!! I AM SUPER SCARED! CAN YOU DRIVER FASTER?” The mom told Miya “Hey do not give him that sassiness he is helping us get home faster.”  

One Comment

  1. Hi Mia,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    If Bigfoot doesn’t exist…I wonder what other reason there was for the trees to be moving?
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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