Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

The Strange Man Pt. 7

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Written by Mikayla for the 1oo word challenge

 Then we stopped. It was a little hard to breathe. Then Joe read my thoughts and said, “It might be a little hard to breathe.” Then something rose from the sand. It looked like a zombie except it was 10 times scarier than you would imagine. “Time to fight,” Joe said. He pulled out a sword and handed it to me. He also pulled out a knife and handed it to Lily. The sword was cool, but it was heavier than I expected. Then the monster’s eyes rolled to the back of its head and more rose from the sand.  

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  1. Yikes! Sand monsters! The story flows quickly enough to impress the danger of the situation. Good job.

    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100
    Illinois, USA

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