Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Shooting Star

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Written by Alicia for the 100 word challenge

Today was particularly important for Aliyah. Today was the day she had to perform in front of the whole school. She was so nervous, but also feverish. When Aliyah got in the car, she realized she forgot what she was going to say. Soon after she told her parents, they rushed back home. She then grabbed her script and ran back into the car squiring. They then drove towards the school. When they got there, they realized they were late and rushed her to go up on stage. But before she said anything, she saw a flash of light, then, darkness… 

3 Comments

  1. Such a cool and interesting blog. I’m really curious about what will happen next.

  2. Such a cool and interesting blog. I’m really curious about what will happen next.

  3. Hello Alicia! I wonder what happened to Aliyah in the end. It seems to me that she was ill and fainted on stage. I love your introduction to this story. The repetition of ‘today’ emphasises how important the performance is to the main character, and I really felt for her there.

    Great work and keep writing!

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