Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

Space Mission

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Written by Raiya for the 100 word challenge

Liftoff in three, two, one, here we go! Hi, I’m Jackson Lewis. I’m here with my amazing sister, or mission control, Raiya Lewis. We are planning to land on planet Utleops. We landed and saw weird creatures. “Aliens! Finally, I can probably make some extra bucks with this discovery!” I thought. They were all different colors. The orange one spoke first,” (*&JUG*&^RGFI*%RFH*&TV&%C#R^TB&NY?” Luckily, I brought my translator with me. They had said,” Hello, I am Jhop, who are you?” I said,” Hi! I am Jackson Lewis. Nice to meet you.” Their eyes turned red,” Attack!” Jhop said. I got scared. 

One Comment

  1. Raiya,
    Oh no! What a frightening turn of events. I felt bad for Jackson Lewis who seemed to be such a positive traveler because the beings they discovered seemed to be so aggressive. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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