Fifth Grade

Champion Learners

The Hybrid

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Written by Raiya for the 100 word challenge

Lavender was rolling in a huge pile of leaves happy. It was fall. Lavender was a very crafty person. One of her best talents was making castles out of white paper and selling them so others could decorate and have fun. Lavender has soft brown hair, and she’s part wolf so she has wolf ears and a wolf tail. One day,” Lavender! You need to head to school.” Her mom called. Lavender ran to school. She tripped, everyone laughed and laughed. “Ha! The common wolf tripped!”  Lavender was boiling inside. All the sudden, a diamond shaped mark on her face appeared. 

 

2 Comments

  1. Hello Raiya,

    That was a pleasant way to incorporate the prompts into your story line. Going through the story, I didn’t expect Lavender to be a wolf. That was a surprise!

    Keep up the good work, and, keep on writing, Raiya.

  2. Thank you so much! You see, me and my cousin play,” Hybrids” all the time and I’m usually part wolf, so it just sprang on me! Thank you again for the very sweet, thoughtful, nice comment!!!

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