Written by Kali for the 100 word challenge
Hello, my name is Mia and today I was helping my friend, Kali, move. So, I went over to her old house, and she asked me to take one of the dining room chairs out to the moving van. So, I picked it up and, “WOW!!” It was much heavier than I expected. It felt like a stone brick other than like a chicken (as I thought). But I brought it out to the moving van even though it was a little hard. After we were done putting the stuff into the moving van, I finally got to see her new house, “YAY!!”
February 22, 2021 at 1:08 am
Hello Kali, what a great comparison between a heavy brick and a chicken! Great use of the exclamation, Wow. It’s always good to finish a job and seeing the new house would have been exciting as your story shows. Well done.
February 22, 2021 at 2:15 am
Hi Kali!
Your story brought back memories from college when I used to help my friends move-some of those boxes were so heavy! Your story flows well and probably sparks a lot of memories in other readers, too.
I am going to nominate you for this week’s showcase 🙂
Francine (Team 100wc)
Twin Cities, Minnesota USA